In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
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school
have a better edge over their counterparts. In my opinion, I totally agree with the notion because it affects the build up
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build-up
self esteem
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self-esteem
restrict
competitive spirit which affects the male child.
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To begin
with, the development of personal confidence in the female child happens at a much younger age in the presence of interracting
with the opposite sex. Correct your spelling
interacting
Thus
, this
hider them in
acculturating into a new system when they graduate into tertiary education. Change preposition
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For instance
, a study conducted in 1993 by the Federal Ministry of Education revealed vividly that one of the key reason
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reasons
low
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a low
interraction
with their masculine age pair. Correct your spelling
interaction
Therefore
, this
imbalance has a negative impact on personal development.
Another point to consider is that the male gender has a much slower
level of assimilation when they are younger. But in a joint-sex Correct your spelling
lower
school
, they are able to balance this
out as they compete to do better in assessments and examinations. For example
, in a recent survey conducted by 25 teachers of an all boys
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all-boys
school
, majority
attested to the fact that maximum motivation in boys can be achieved when both gender are placed in the same class for learning.
To conclude, in as much as we have more regions that have adopted to give parents the option to choose, teachers and Correct article usage
the majority
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autorities
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authorities
indescent
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indecent
inappropraite
practices among students.Correct your spelling
inappropriate
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite