governments spends much more money for education. More money should be spent on free time activities. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

In any ,

national

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government has the authority to allocate

money

for various sectors. It is argued, that authorities grant a huge portion of

money

on

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education, rather than

on

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to

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recreational

activities

.I totally disagree with

this

statement, because investing

money

in extracurricular

activities

is pivotal in many ways.

This

essay will discuss the reasons behind my argument.

To begin

with,

although

there are a plethora of educational resources, children rarely engage in leisure

activities

.

However

, participation in sports and games

are

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vital these days,

due to

the numerous advantages which can be gained by adolescents. To

further

illustrate, youngsters can improve a variety of skills by participating in extra

activities

. They can enhance physical fitness, especially endurance,mental and physical fitness,stamina and flexibility. Simultaneously, creativity, analytical skills and critical thinking can be improved by attending games like chess and

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.

For instance

, in any ,society all-rounders with these qualities can be easily identified. At the same time, they are far more precious to any nation in various ways.

Moreover

, if the government can allocate more

money

for extra

activities

, schools can enhance the infrastructure facilities, which will give countless opportunities for students to reach the international arena. Brilliant performers can represent their own nation in

Olympics

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the Olympics

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and in

world cup

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World Cup

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tournaments

,

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so that they can bring recognition to their nation at large.

Sri

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The Sri

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Lankan cricket team had been the champions of the 1996 cricket

world cup

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World Cup

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,

for instance

, brought fame to Sri Lanka. In conclusion, spending more

money

on education will curb the opportunities for the reputation

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by sports. In the long run,

this

will

impact enhancing

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the country's image globally.

Therefore

, sufficient allocations and methodologies should be implemented by authorities to improve the sports facilities in schools.