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More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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In
this
 high technology world,
people
 like to live alone more than to live in
the
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society
.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons
of
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why
people
who
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tend to live alone in
this
 contemporary world. The reason why
people
 prefer to live by themselves lie in individuals and societal values. One of the reasons is increasing modernization.
People
 in the past lived with a big family and cared about the family and community,
however
,
people
 in the present prioritize their own life over others.
Therefore
, individualism is increasing in modern
society
.
People
 like to be alone without any
distraction
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distractions
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 and
disturbance
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 from others. They opt to live alone.
In addition
, to
this
,
society
 starts to respect
to
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this
kind
 of family in a different way.
For example
,
people
 have come to any gathering or family party with different types of families like a single-person household.
This
 developing trend can have advantages and disadvantages results. With regards to advantages, those at
kind
 of
people
 are able to concentrate on their studies.
For instance
, they can improve their on-computer skills because
this
kind
 of major needs more focusing as well as no disturbing.
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so they can put all their energy into learning
this
 type of course.
On the other hand
, living alone
by
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 own can alienate
themselves
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 from others including family members. The result of
this
kind
 of life is loneliness. In conclusion, living alone can become
a
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 main path in some societies because now we live in an individualistic
society
 and we are going
to
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this
 rapid pace.
This
 type of life’s make distance between family members and
society
.
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