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The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

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majority
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 of the
people
 across the globe prefer to put on the same style of clothes, use the same brands, watch the same entertainment channels, and have similar eating habits, the variance amongst all the
countries
 is significantly reduced. The
benefits
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 of
this
 trend
is
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 that
people
 do not feel distinguished from others where ever they travel across the world .
Moreover
, they do not have to compromise for the things of their
choices
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. Nowadays, majority of the
people
 tend to travel
different
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countries
 for work, pleasure, or study
purpose
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. It will be feasible for
people
 to easily acclimate to the new place if they get food and basic brands of things of their preferences.
For example
, McDonald’s food chain has spread globally and is popular amongst all the
countries
, so
people
 do not have to compromise by consuming food
which
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 they might not prefer to have.
Moreover
, it spreads the sense
equality
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 on the planet, if
people
 all over the world wear
similar
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a similar
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style
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styles
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 of clothes and follow the same fashion.
For instance
,
clothing
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the clothing
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style
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styles
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 of certain
countries
are
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 so traditional that it differentiates them from the rest of the population of
world
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. The only drawback
this
 trend holds is that
,
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 the uniqueness of the particular country’s culture
is vanished
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. Due to
increased
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 use of social networking sites,
people
 are getting more aware of different styles and trends happening globally.
As a result
, when
people
 travel to different
countries
, they do not get to see or learn anything new. To conclude, the advantages of having
less
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 differences amongst all the
countries
establishes
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 the sense of similarity among all the
people
 on the planet and makes life easy
of
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people
 who fly to various
countries
 by not affecting their preferences.
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