Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Using identical products all around the world has made all

nations

look almost the same, as

people

can purchase similar

goods

in different countries. I call it positive progress in globalization. Nowadays all the

nations

are moving toward globalization at a fast pace and “the more looking the same” is not an exception.

Firstly

, the coherence

that is

made by using similar

goods

is very positive, because

people

can all use the same things, so they can all enjoy the good quality products

such

as a branded cell phones wherever they are.

Secondly

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the impact that it’s got on creating jobs cannot be denied. There will be more job opportunities as countries need to import and export

goods

. For ,example if we look at the clothing industry, we can figure out that large numbers of population work for these companies, there are selling departments, packing groups and shipping companies to deliver the

goods

to the destination port and

finally

there are local distributors who sell to shops and boutiques. So many

people

are involved and can benefit from

this

industry.

On the other hand

, while it’s a positive development it’s got drawbacks too. Some local businesses lose their jobs because

people

tend to buy trendy products,

such

as fashionable clothes.

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those who produce traditional clothes will gradually be jobless and

as a

result

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some cultural heritage will slowly fade away. Another disadvantage can be the environmental effects of producing and shipping.

For example

, we can see very large quantities of garments and clothes produced by international companies every year and shipped by large carriers that are polluting the environment which has adverse environmental effects on air and water and on the whole ecosystems of the earth. In conclusion, as the world is going through a global modernization and the fast connection of

nations

,

this

change is inevitable,

therefore

it is logical that

people

and countries look more similar in every aspect which I believe can be a positive development through the cohesion that we can see among all

nations

.