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Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Then
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 design building of house and office, according to some, is the option based on individuals preparation.
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,
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 provided by some cities control design and
construction
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.
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, the government should respect
people
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's opinions; there are some benefits if each member of
society
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 following the
rules
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. In the beginning, as we live in the computer age, we cannot ignore the cutting edge of high tech. Today,
society
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 has greatly benefited from social media.
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, the latest ideas and innovations regarding decoration and houses
construction
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 have become the hot topic on the Pinterest website.
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, everyone should have the right to freedom of deciding on designing and
construction
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, whether home or office.
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, more
people
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 will trust a company, if all the necessary aspects, including designing, are considered perfectly by the senior executive of the company.
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 why these two points depend on the manager's business plan, not urban
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. In the
second
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 place, the most recent models estimate that over the
next
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 two decades, we are going to experience a massive population in the big cities.
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, following the
rules
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 described plainly by the government plays a crucial role to not only tackle problems that occur due to the increasing population but
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 make life easier for the
next
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 generation.
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, if
people
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 wanted to demonstrate their culture to foreign
people
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 in the past, they had to invite them to their country whereas these days both ability in photography and enthusiasm are factors that encourage and enable them to attract tourism.
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, considering
rules
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 laid down in terms of building and
construction
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 is a key point to show
society
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's behaviour. To conclude, all the members of the community can apply their style for a house or office.
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, the design and
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 should be controlled by governments provides more benefits for
society
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 by comparing to when set the
people
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 free.

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