In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the

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feel

urge

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to do strenuous

work

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so that they can save money for their

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kids

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education.

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, due to

absence

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the absence

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of

parents

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at

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,

kids

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have to face

lack

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of support. I will

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my views on

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opinion

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in

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essay.

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, in today’s fast- pacing world, where price surging is a big issue.

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, to save for

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higher studies and to meet the ends of family, it is

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mandatory for

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the

parents

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to

work

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. If mother and father will

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do job

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, they can afford things and can have

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life

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for themselves and their children. As we have seen,

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mom

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refrained themselves in the

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and give their all attention to their babies or household.

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, she will have no time for herself. By going out at

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, it will give her time to think about herself and will

also

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give her financial independence.

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, if

mother

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of a toddler

start

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doing

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, she will meet new people at

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which will not only refresh her mood but will

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give her confidence.

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, teenagers need

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at

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for emotional support and expect their

mainly

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mother

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to give them attention. But when nobody is around

kids

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, they can get addicted to video games. Excessive use of mobile phones can affect their eyes and health.

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, there are many cases getting reported that

kids

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fall

in

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cyber trap and have

use

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their

parent

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parents

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debit or credit card and have lost a huge amount of money. In the conclusion, we can say that there are two schools of opinion. One is that

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partners need to earn money to live a happy life. The counterargument of

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is that

kids

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at

home

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required at least one parent at

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. The solution to

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problem is

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approach. At least one of the

parent

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,

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can do

job

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the job

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that doesn’t require to go office and can do

work

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from

home

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.