s people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any reservations? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

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The technology of cloning is advanced as we move towards the future it has become normal

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even though

, it is not welcomed by the majority of

people

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, we get to know cloning better by understanding the advantages in my opinion humans might learn to accept it. To begin with, cloning humans for the purpose of supplying spare

organs

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for the donors and patients as they would not have to be in a chaotic situation at the nick of the moment.

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, cloned human beings

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considered to be sufficient

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even though

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people

. As the

organs

are cloned from artificial humans and it comes with the demerits

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need of replacing the body parts to improve the organ functions, stability etc seems to not convince

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that it is safe. If we are exposed to the advantages cloning comes with

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awareness programs, educational camps

people

might believe in

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alternative.

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conducting seminars on

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topic in schools will educate the children on cloning

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introducing

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topic and avoiding the suspicion and encouraging

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benifits

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it may be concluded that I do agree

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procedure and there is scope for cloning human beings for their

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as it is

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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