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Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. Do you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples for your response.

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Most
schools
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 children have mobile
phones
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 these days, and some
people
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 think that teenagers should not be allowed to
use
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 them in
schools
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. In my opinion, mobiles should not be permitted in
schools
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 because they are disturbing, reduce face-to-face interaction and have a negative impact on their health. The main reason that
phones
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 should be prohibited in
schools
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 is that they reduce student concentration and participation in lessons. They can get app notifications when they get messages from friends, and some
students
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 may care too much about them when they are waiting for replies from others.
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 recent survey shows that junior high
school
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students
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 who do not bring their
phones
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 to their own study rooms have higher scores on the exam than
people
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 who bring.
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, though mobile
phones
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 are sometimes useful for study, it is clear that it has a negative impact on grades. A
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 reason is that
school
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 is not only a place for teaching some subjects,
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 as math or English, but
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 for teaching morality and communication. Using mobile
phones
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 at
school
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 increases
students
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’ time by themselves,
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, watching YouTube or social media, and
students
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 communication skills are not be improved. There is research which shows that
people
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 who spent their
school
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 days with friends tend to be less get angry than
people
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 who had shorter time with friends.
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, it is beneficial for
students
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 to spend much more time with their classmates, not on their
phones
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. A final reason is that phone
use
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 is not good for their eye well-being. Mobile
phones
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 emit radiation called blue light, and it affects the eyes negatively. Recently, blue cut glasses which can cut 70% of
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 light have become available, but without these glasses,
people
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 are more likely to get eye disease when they get older than 50.
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, in order to maintain good long-term eye fitness,
students
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 should be encouraged to
use
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 their
phones
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 as little as possible. In conclusion,
although
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 there are a lot of pupils who have their own mobile
phones
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, I agree with the idea that they shouldn’t
use
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 them at
school
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, since it has bad influences on their grades, communication skills and health.
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