In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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People have different views about attending

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single-sex

schools

. Some of them are worried

about

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that

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that child

those children

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children

who spend their

school

life in

this

kind of

school

would suffer negative

inpacts

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impacts

impact

in their future life. In my opinion, I

compeletly

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completely

agree

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this

view and I will give my reasons in

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essay.

First

, single-sex

schools

are instituted for some special parents and students. In

ancient

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world, we often

seperated

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separated

girls from boys for obeying some moral and ethnic rules, which resulted that some people still believe that

this

education system is beneficial for youngers.

For example

, there are single-sex

schools

in Japanese nowadays because of traditional cultures.

Besides

, having single-sex

schools

is not uncommon in some

region

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due to religious beliefs. Whereas these cases mentioned above, I believe that we should send our

children

to a co-educational

school

This

is not to say that we must objective other single-sex

schools

and force all

student

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students

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to attend co-

eductional

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educational

schools

. We should respect different cultures and beliefs. There are two main reasons why I do not choose a single-sex

school

. On

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hand,

schools

have never been a place for us to learn

knowleadge

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knowledge

only, but we learn how to interact with a variety of persons

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there. If there are only girls or boys at

schools

, the social network would be incomplete.

On the other hand

, some parents choose single-sex

schools

for their

children

to prevent their

children

falling

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in love too early. While

this

thought is old-fashioned thanks to the development of social media and their

children

are available to search

any

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information they are interested in. In conclusion, the

exist

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the

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single-sex

school

is reasonable in some countries.

However

, I think that registering in a co-educational

school

has more advantages.

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