In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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would suffer negative

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, single-sex

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are instituted for some special parents and students. In

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world, we often

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education system is beneficial for youngers.

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in Japanese nowadays because of traditional cultures.

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is not uncommon in some

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due to religious beliefs. Whereas these cases mentioned above, I believe that we should send our

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to a co-educational

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is not to say that we must objective other single-sex

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to attend co-

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. We should respect different cultures and beliefs. There are two main reasons why I do not choose a single-sex

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. On

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hand,

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have never been a place for us to learn

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only, but we learn how to interact with a variety of persons

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there. If there are only girls or boys at

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, the social network would be incomplete.

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for their

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in love too early. While

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thought is old-fashioned thanks to the development of social media and their

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are available to search

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information they are interested in. In conclusion, the

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the

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single-sex

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is reasonable in some countries.

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, I think that registering in a co-educational

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has more advantages.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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