Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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global world, there is lacking charity,relationships and sharing habits.
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strongly believe that charity services like helping
others
, keeping
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relationship with neighbours and sharing your curricular and
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extra curricular
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skills with your juniors ,should be an unavoidable part of
school
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curriculum
. As we are living in the 21st century,
noone
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no one
none
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time for
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. Admittedly all are busy with their own
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poeple
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people
forget about
others
.If the scenario goes like
this
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years people
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be knowing their own household
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members
and their needs.
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God created us
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, So we have emotions that should be expressed. you should be kind to those who need it. Bible
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us that "If you have two dress you should
share
the extra one to
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whom
it needed".
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we
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don't
doesn't
know who is living in our
next
house,
that is
unacceptable . Tacitly everyone must know about their neighbours not only by their names but
also
having
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with them.Especially our
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children are not aware of these things, so it is
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necessary
to teach them these all qualities. Apparently from
school
level teachers as well as parents should make the
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children
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children
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to develop their sharing behaviour,
For instance
, they can start sharing their lunch, snacks and toys with
others
.we should train them how to makes
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friendships
as well as how to maintain
this
.
Therefore
kids will come to know the importance of these.
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senior students must
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share
all their knowledge with juniors
then
only they will
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the upcoming generations. To put it
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pendown
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pen down
saying that , If we are making the above facts as a
school
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curriculum
then
only children will learn it from their childhood. So they will have
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consideration with
others
.
childrern
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children
must have
competion
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competition
spirit at the same time they should
share
their knowledge and other things with
others
. Our children are ready to do so
then
they will be having a better future for sure.
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try for our
next
generations
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better life.
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