Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Several people believe one of the good ways to bringing humans of different cultures and ages together is
music
. In
this
essay, I will either agree or disagree with
this
statement, and I will express my opinion on the matter.
Firstly
, I will discuss how
music
can getting the public together and
secondly
, I will explore the benefits. In the beginning, the
music
is the voice of freedom.
Likewise
, the
music
for every country is different, but the feeling when everybody listening to it is almost the same. As well,
this
feeling is one of the causes of getting humans together.
For example
, if open some happy song in a different language for somebody who doesn't know that they will be dancing because
this
is a feeling that the song's tone gives us.
Furthermore
, if you are attending a concert that you don't know anybody, the emotion everybody has at that time are identical, and you can have an emotional relationship with all the crowd there.
On the other hand
,
music
has numerous benefits for our lives and
also
has a huge share in our happiness and sad time.
For instance
, at our wedding
music
has the main share, it doesn't matter how old you are everybody dancing and singing together. Moving on, nowadays doctors suggest the listening to sang can be helpful for pregnant women to have a relationship between mam and baby.
In addition
,
that is
a good way to have better mental health. In conclusion, I think
music
can help the public, who have different cultures and ages, get together and be friends. All in all, I agree with
this
matter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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