Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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whether

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are increasingly dependent on

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or not. In my opinion, I believe that humans are less dependent than ever before due to

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technological development. It is often argued that

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are always seeking help from

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because of the difficulty of their

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' responsibilities. When they encounter challenges regarding managing their daily tasks and running their errands, they tend to rely on each other so that they can accomplish them easily.

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, most working mothers count on their relatives or families members to take care of their children during their working time.

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would type of dependency has enabled humans to alleviate their

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' pressures, which would effectively enable them to adapt

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these challenges.

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, some would claim that the advancement in

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increased

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independency

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among individuals. In the past, it was more likely impossible to handle and process daily applications and cases

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calling someone for help, but now

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situation has completely shifted with the arrival of

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. Now,

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can accomplish their tasks independently, regardless

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hardships

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cutting

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. A typical example of

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is that travellers are not required to manage their booking through a travel agent because they could arrange their trip by

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or mobile application.

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development has taught individuals to minimize their reliance on

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as well as boost their confidence. To sum up, It might seem sensible to believe that

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have increasingly been counting on

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these days due to the hardness of their

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responsibilities.

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, I would go against

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statement because the development of

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has pushed

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toward

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by facilitating the ways they are living their

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.