Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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whether

people

are increasingly dependent on

others

or not. In my opinion, I believe that humans are less dependent than ever before due to

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technological development. It is often argued that

people

are always seeking help from

others

because of the difficulty of their

lives

' responsibilities. When they encounter challenges regarding managing their daily tasks and running their errands, they tend to rely on each other so that they can accomplish them easily.

For example

, most working mothers count on their relatives or families members to take care of their children during their working time.

This

would type of dependency has enabled humans to alleviate their

lives

' pressures, which would effectively enable them to adapt

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these challenges.

On the other hand

, some would claim that the advancement in

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technology

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increased

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independency

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among individuals. In the past, it was more likely impossible to handle and process daily applications and cases

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calling someone for help, but now

this

situation has completely shifted with the arrival of

technology

. Now,

people

can accomplish their tasks independently, regardless

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lives

hardships

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thought

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cutting

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technology

. A typical example of

this

is that travellers are not required to manage their booking through a travel agent because they could arrange their trip by

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or mobile application.

This

development has taught individuals to minimize their reliance on

others

as well as boost their confidence. To sum up, It might seem sensible to believe that

people

have increasingly been counting on

others

these days due to the hardness of their

lives

responsibilities.

However

, I would go against

this

statement because the development of

technology

has pushed

people

toward

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by facilitating the ways they are living their

lives

.