Government should be responsible for fundings and controlling scientific research rather than private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times development in science and technology have started to measure the strength of any nation or any individual. In
this
, regard there is a school of thought who thinks that for any new developments government should provide money and keep an eye on progress
instead
of corporate companies. I agree with
this
thought to some extent and I will shed my views in
this
essay.
Firstly
, in my, opinion when government officials financially support
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any new projects they gain the rights for outcomes any items or products that will prevent the monopoly in the economy by corporates because it will be in public.
For instance
, if public officials fund any research regarding medicine or vaccine it will give them the copyrights of these products and eventually they can provide
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to the public at a lot cheaper price.
Secondly
, as I think when public officials keep an eye on
such
projects they can monitor the progress of the development and they can know the outcomes of that and if the result of those experiments can harm
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or public they can terminate the experiment without any hesitation.
For example
, research regarding arms and ammunitions etc.,
Also
if they can not abort the project they certainly can make some
guiidelines
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guidelines
for utilizing them.
For instance
, nuclear power.
However
, these testings many time ends up in a disappointment as
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of each and
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of them is impossible to predict.
Such
as, space exploration where billions of dollars get wasted and as public sectors funds them with the tax money of hard-working citizens which is very sad. But if private organisations will fund them and if it will go in vain it will not be the public's earnings. Not but least
goverments
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governments
are short-handed many times in their budgets so, many times they cut down the expenses for research which directly hits the bump in the road of success. In
such
cases, the government should allow private companies to provide monetary support for new findings. To conclude, I reiterate my opinion that public and private sectors both should develop some kind of co-operative agreement that's how we will have plenty of money to put in experiments. And we will be strong and blessed with new and advanced technologies.
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