Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
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the majority
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,people
TV
shows and games
on PC are considered as a primary source of entertainment. There is a section of society
that believes the content of these mediums has become violent in today’s age, which has certainly impacted the peace in society
. I would argue that these elements do not significantly impact
human behavior
in our Change the spelling
behaviour
society
.
Firstly
, individual who believes that games
on PC and TV
shows are cruel might argue that these entertainment sources exhibit inhuman behaviour and would certainly increase the aggression level for audience
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the audience
For instance
, movies such
as Hostel and TV
shows like Saw, are harsh for the first
-time audience. In addition
, video games
of new
generation are nothing more than the organized platform for virtual crimes, Add an article
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such
as robberies, accidents and invading a region. Thus
, playing such
games
will be destructive for young minds.
On the other hand
, my view is that Individual own choices make huge
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a huge
impact
in moulding his /her character. In other words
, educated person with strong will power and positive attitude are rarely impacted by the harmful activities in surrounding. Secondly
, these days their lot
of education programs on Correct article usage
a lot
TV
which are beneficial to school children. Similarly
, games
on PC helps to boost brain power and improve strategic thinking. If the content of these medium
were so destructive Change the determiner
this medium
these media
than
every viewer will be furious, but that’s not the case.
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then
TV
and computer games
have become harsh to some extent,
and might Remove the comma
apply
impact
the
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apply
society
, but these factors are not creating any impact
on self-determined and positive people. In my opinion, illiteracy and ignorance are responsible factors of aggression after watching the brutal content.Submitted by rahulbhajji on
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