Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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world, no

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can be perfectly done without trying again by any person whether he or she is a child or adult. Resultantly, whereas some people claim that adolescents have the

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in doing

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, others contend that parents and other guardians ought to deter their children to do

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. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that without preventing juveniles to do wrong things, it is

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to impossible to correct them. Inasmuch as without making

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it is not possible to learn things perfectly, teenagers must be given the

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to do

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repeatedly.

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, when a child sees that the desired output is not coming after so much effort in a

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, he tries to find out the reason behind

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, increasing his thinking and problem-solving capability. In

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way,

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child can get to know the detailed insight about that

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and will not commit

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a type of mistake.

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, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 90% of youngsters learn accurately only after doing

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repeatedly.

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, juveniles should have the space to try again and again until they learn. Plausible though the

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of doing

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facilitates learning deeply, it is not a good idea for learning in

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competitive era down to having so many tasks.

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to say, in order to survive in

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dog-eat-dog world, students must involve themselves not only in educational activities but

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in extracurricular events. So, if they had to learn as a topic

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as math or science by rectifying

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, again and again, it would not possible to compete with other counterparts.

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, adults should guide adolescents from

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to

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so as to bring out the perfect result at one

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. To exemplify, researcher around the world reveals that 99% of professionals are successful on because their parents prevented them doing

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. In conclusion, much as the

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of doing

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is beneficial for learning deeply, it consumes

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for many children.

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, I unequivocally buttress the stand of not giving enough space to youngsters to do any wrong

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