Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

this

world, no

task

can be perfectly done without trying again by any person whether he or she is a child or adult. Resultantly, whereas some people claim that adolescents have the

freedom

in doing

mistakes

, others contend that parents and other guardians ought to deter their children to do

mistakes

. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that without preventing juveniles to do wrong things, it is

next

to impossible to correct them. Inasmuch as without making

mistakes

it is not possible to learn things perfectly, teenagers must be given the

freedom

to do

mistakes

repeatedly.

In other words

, when a child sees that the desired output is not coming after so much effort in a

task

, he tries to find out the reason behind

this

, increasing his thinking and problem-solving capability. In

this

way,

this

child can get to know the detailed insight about that

task

and will not commit

such

a type of mistake.

For instance

, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 90% of youngsters learn accurately only after doing

mistakes

repeatedly.

Therefore

, juveniles should have the space to try again and again until they learn. Plausible though the

freedom

of doing

mistakes

facilitates learning deeply, it is not a good idea for learning in

this

competitive era down to having so many tasks.

That is

to say, in order to survive in

this

dog-eat-dog world, students must involve themselves not only in educational activities but

also

in extracurricular events. So, if they had to learn as a topic

such

as math or science by rectifying

mistakes

, again and again, it would not possible to compete with other counterparts.

Therefore

, adults should guide adolescents from

time

to

time

so as to bring out the perfect result at one

time

. To exemplify, researcher around the world reveals that 99% of professionals are successful on because their parents prevented them doing

mistakes

. In conclusion, much as the

freedom

of doing

mistakes

is beneficial for learning deeply, it consumes

time

for many children.

Hence

, I unequivocally buttress the stand of not giving enough space to youngsters to do any wrong

task

.