Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?

Education

is an important factor for success in life.

However

, Because of dropping out

from

Change preposition

of

show examples

the

schools

Fix the agreement mistake

school

show examples

, many juveniles are remaining unemployed. It is the cause of societal degradation.

Moreover

, society will be fallen

in

Change preposition

into

show examples

unstable

Add an article

an unstable

show examples

condition

Fix the agreement mistake

conditions

show examples

. In the body paragraph, I will provide the related causes and solutions for that.

First

of all, I believe the predominant cause for

unemployed

Add an article

the unemployed

show examples

problem is

education

Add an article

the education

show examples

system. The

education

system needs to have a polished vision.

For instance

,

In

Add a hyphen

In-country

show examples

country

Add an article

a country

show examples

like Bangladesh focus on

theoritical

Correct your spelling

theoretical

knowledge rather

Correct your spelling

than

show examples

that

Correct your spelling

than

show examples

pragmatic knowledge. On the

hand

Correct quantifier usage

other hand

show examples

,

education

cost creates a major drawback for

for

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

dropping out. Many parents can not bear the

education

cost for their children. So, It could not be possible for them to move forward. So,

this things

Change the determiner

this thing

these things

show examples

are needed to be considered to eradicate the dropout. In spite of

those problem

Change the determiner

that problem

those problems

show examples

, we can modify the system and it will help to diminish the issue. For that, we have to reduce

education

cost

Fix the agreement mistake

costs

show examples

so that young people can build the structure for their future

career

Fix the agreement mistake

careers

show examples

.

For example

, we can collect money from angel

investor

Fix the agreement mistake

investors

show examples

and utilize

those money

Change the determiner

that money

show examples

to help indigent people to carry out their

education

.

Furthermore

, We can add labs and other facilities to support the student in practical knowledge. To conclude, Without solving the issue we may not be able to diminish the dropout of

young

Add an article

a young

show examples

student

Fix the agreement mistake

students

show examples

and to remove unemployment. So essential steps are required to make a

producative

Correct your spelling

productive

and educated society.