For centuries, importan parts of education have remained such reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to added to the list. to what extent do you agree?

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, society thinks reading, writing and maths are
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part
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of knowledge.But in recent years some believe
computer
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science
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added to the fourth skill.For
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i
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agree with
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topic because
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time
computer
is everything.
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foremost ,in
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era all things connected with computers
as a result
humans communicated
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other exchanged information anywhere and anytime developed faster than before.If
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some one
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someone
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dont
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don't
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use
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device will get old news and difficult to run
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business
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or job.
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carpenter, who makes wonderful furniture other wooden stuff and sold in local market versus who makes just great ones but sell in
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online
website.
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Compare
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two earnings who know
computer
and internet earnings will enormous.Because his customer is seven billion people so knowing technology gives us so many
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advantages
.
Secondly
not only
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business
,
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but it can also
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improve our knowledge and live condition.Using a desktop or laptop with
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the internet
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gives us global
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so who lives in
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can know what happened in
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.
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with help of
computer
programming
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people can create robots with artificial intelligence so humans can no longer do physical hard works
such
as landscaping, grounds-keeping, roofers.
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only technology
help
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us to get out
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and show other
fasinaticing
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fascinating
planets and galaxy so humans need to
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continue
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learn more technology. In conclusion
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undoubtably
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undoubtedly
computer
knowledge can help us greatly so it should be added in the list of
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part of educations and already many nations
such
as USA, England, China etc added
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a computer
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to subject and teaching
programms
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programmes
programs
in kids.Since it has
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obvious positive impact on various essential life facilities.
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