Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Worlds history is very rich. There are many historical
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around the globe that are attracting
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from all over the world.
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, a plethora of
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opine
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that these ancient
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and plots should be replaced with modern architecture while other groups of persons are believing that these historical monuments should be conserved. Before commenting on my own point of view, both these aspects would be analysed
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. On the one hand, some modern pupils are argued that old
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should be removed and in place of that new structure should be designed with modern interior and exterior.
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is due to; they think that these properties are too old to live there and those are not able to withstand the earthquakes.
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, many
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from old Mumbai were demonetised in order to build new projects. Another main reason is that the roots of these types of construction are getting weaker day by day due to bad soil quality.
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, a group of old mindset
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are strongly believing that the historical establishments must be maintained, and
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suggest that those structures should be open to tourists in order to witness famous architectural premises.
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, many churches and libraries are kept open for a crowd so that they can see and in place of that some charges are taken from them as maintenance charges. These ancient
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can be an inspiration to the new architects to learn old designs. To conclude and encapsulate, many
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wanted those old structures should be demolished and replaced with homes and common plots.
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, I believe that the old ancestral structures should not be demolished to not only present and promote the rich culture of our history but
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for gaining knowledge in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • paramount
  • evolutionary journey
  • tangible link
  • fostering
  • sense of belonging
  • architectural beauty
  • economic benefit
  • tourist attractions
  • preservation techniques
  • structural integrity
  • energy-efficient
  • sustainable architecture
  • cultural preservation
  • urban demands
  • contemporary lifestyles
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