More people are now behaving more violently in society than before. Can this behaviour be prevented? Discuss the causes and reasons for this trend. Provide examples to support your opinion.

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has become the latest trend. People are crossing all boundaries, behaving violently in

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society than ever before. It is a big question mark if these can be prevented. In

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the reasons for

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trend. To start with, one primary thing behind

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Social Media. Previously most of us would spend our time playing

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games or reading books. Nowadays, at a very young

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every other person is

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the social networking apps like

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. They have

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easy access to connect with individuals and build relations.

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, a boy starts following a girl in any of these applications and slowly tries to communicate with her. Had the opponent not responded as expected, a kind of grudge develops within the person and would lead to harassment or any vulgar actions.

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capricious doing would ultimately spoil both the girl and the boy's future.

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moves can be prevented by giving immediate strict punishments.

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way a kind of fear will be created among the public.

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, there should be awareness programs being given on society management. In conclusion, as all the brutal activities

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been increasing day by day. Government should take

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issue as a serious concern and take necessary actions as sooner as possible.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

violent behavior
society
prevention
causes
trend
exposure to violence
media
positive role models
psychological issues
socioeconomic factors
proper education
values
peer pressure
neglectful parenting
substance abuse
social support
community cohesion

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