Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Since the dawn of
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times
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wild
animals
are kept in
zoos
all over
world
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.
This
is a controversial issue. At present,
zoos
are
tourist
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attraction
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attractions
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in many countries and need wild
animals
to attract visitors. I
beleve
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believe
that they should not be kept in
zoos
and there should be alternative places to see them.
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essay will discuss both sides and an opinion will be put forth. There are many good reasons to not build
zoos
in our cities. 1)
First
of all, god’s
precius
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precious
gifts need to live in their natural habitat.
Furthermore
,
zoos
are no place for wild things. If
animals
need to be cared for, they should be looked after in
theier
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their
natural
habitat
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in game parks or wildlife reserves.
Goverments
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Governments
Government
should look after the precious wild
animals
at
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their country and should close down
zoos
that profit
for
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them. 2) Another valid reason to support
this
view is that people can see wild
animals
on the internet, or in books. They don’t need to visit
htem
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them
in cages where they are sick or dying.
Moreover
, These
zoos
try to make money from
animals
misery and they don’t care
of
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the
animals
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welfare.
A recent
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research in Harvard shows that 89% of all wild
animals
die in cages. 3)
In addition
to
this
, we should allow
animals
to live in the wild. They can be healthy in their own habitat, they can hunt and have normal behaviour. They cannot do
this
in a zoo. In the future, if
man
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wants to see wild
animals
, we must travel to their country and see them in the wild in their
enviroment
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environment
and not ours. In a
nutshell
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people believe that
zoos
are good places to keep wild
animals
, I feel that we do not need
zoos
anymore and we can look at wild
animals
on the internet or
travell
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travel
to
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there and we can be happy for these wild
creature
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