Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Travelling around the world has become more popular nowadays. Currently, many people prefer to visit places that are located remotely.
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discuss the merits and
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demerits
of the aforementioned situation.
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of all,
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with, visiting a
place
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situated far away from the human intervention comes with many advantages. Going to
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a location will allow people to escape from reality and their busy life and explore more about themselves, as well as about the new
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. These
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of areas usually lack the access to
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and
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, individuals end up spending more quality time than usual.
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, not so long ago, I planned a trip to the nearby forest from my city, with a couple of my friends. That
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was so beautiful and peaceful that we did not even realise that we do not have access to our mobiles or laptops.
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, we got to know each other quite well and
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, our friendship not only became
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deeper but
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stronger.
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, going to any
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situated far away from the town or locality has some drawbacks too. Talking about a remote
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means it has very limited or even no availability of some of the important resources
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as communication, medical treatment, food or transportation.
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, when we visited the nearby forest, we struggled a lot finding
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food. Since it was situated quite far from the neighbour city, only a few options were available for meals. Other than that, when we were heading back to our tents, one of my friends had breathing issues due to an asthmatic reaction and we had to drive back to the home urgently due to lack of
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medical resources. In conclusion, paying a visit to any remote area can be beneficial for many people but they should consider the above-mentioned pros and cons to ensure they do not face any serious issues.
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