Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough in learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In many
levels
of
education
, there is a big amount of
time
focused on learning facts. There is not too much
time
to help the students to
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develop
learning practical skills.
Although
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I agree with the statement, I think that
this
situation
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changed in the
last
years
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. The
education
models, like other sciences, have
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evolution
revolutionized
and changed
its
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traditional's methods in the
last
years
.
First
at
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all, nowadays we look
some
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schools more worried about the ways to make easier
the
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learning for the students.
For example
,
in
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some kindergartens, are teaching
to
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the kids to identify the
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kinds of learning. That
help
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them to identify the easier way to learn of each one. When somebody
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that he or she likes to learn by practical methods, so they try to look for
this
kind of learning in their
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levels
of
education
.
Second
, at least in the higher
levels
of educations (bachelors and
postgraduate)
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there is a great
amount
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of universities mixing the study
time
with the work
time
.
For example
, before, students of the programs of medicine
,
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started to
asists
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assist
assists
in
hospital
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hospitals
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in the finals
years
of their programs. Now,
this
have
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changed, since they are coursing the
second
year of studies they start to
asists
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assist
assists
in the hospitals.
This
mixing between
theorical
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theoretical
and empirical knowledge, helps them to
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understand
better the
differents
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subjects and topics. In conclusion, it's real that in all
levels
of
education
, we have a great
ammount
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amount
of
time
spent in learning facts and not enough in learning practical skills. But, we
also
must say that
this
situation
have
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been changing in the
last
years
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few years
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. And, if
this
tends
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, I
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thing
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in the future we will have a 50/50 distribution of
this
time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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