online shopping will be the closing reason of all shops in cities and towns, do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, several

stores

offers

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a lot of

disccounts

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discounts

only

in

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its

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their

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website to promote

the

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online shopping. That situation

have

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made that some people prefer to buy online than to go to the physical

store

. Even though, I think that

this

situation is

a

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just a reality, I disagree with the statement

,

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because the experience of go and shopping in a

store

can'

t

be replaced

for

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the

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online shopping.

First

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at

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all, I think that exist two groups of

clients

, one group who buy things

for

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to

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have the experience of going shopping; and a

second

group that just buy things because they need

it

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them

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.

For example

, one person of the

first

group

,

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will prefer going to the shop in a

phisical

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physical

store

than buying something in the online

store

. Even if the price is higher, they will prefer going to the

store

. So, the

stores

will maintain their physical

stores

for

these kind

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of

clients

. A

second

one

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reason is that today we still

having

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a lots

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of products which we can'

t

buy without some

asistence

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assistance

that helps us to find the product that we need.

For example

, when we are looking for a part of our car, it's not too easy just shopping online, sometimes we don'

t

know what part of the car

need

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to be replaced. In these cases, we will prefer to go to the local

store

and get the part that we need. In conclusion, we can'

t

negret

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regret

neglect

negate

that several

stores

are migrating its

stores

to online

shoppings

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shopping

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. But, always there will be some

clients

who will prefer to go to the

store

and for that

clients

, the companies must maintain its physical

stores

.

Also

exist some products that we'll prefer to buy in the local

store

under the guidance of an expert.