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The given chart provides information about the amount of a country's export earnings in different categories in the years 2015 and 2016. The table explains the percentage change of these categories of export in the
year
2016 as compared with 2015. Overall it can be depicted that in the years 2016 and 2015 the contribution of petroleum
products
and textiles was highest and lowest respectively.
Moreover
, the ratio of textile and jewellery increased and decreased respectively in the latter
year
. As can be seen in the bar chart, in the
year
2015 the petroleum
products
and engineered goods contributed more in the export earnings as compared to other groups which were just above and almost 60
billion
dollars
respectively, while the contribution of gems and jewellery and the agricultural product was just above 40
billion
dollars
and a bit more than 30
billion
dollars
respectively.
Moreover
, that of textiles was almost 30
billion
dollars
.
On the other hand
, the percentage change in the value of petroleum
products
, engineered goods, agricultural
products
and textiles increased in the
year
2016 by 3, 8.5, 0.81 and 15.24 per cent respectively, while the percentage in the value of gems and jewellery decreased by 5.18 per cent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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