Many people use distance-learning programs and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending collages or universities does. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people use distance-learning programs to learn at home
although
it is believed by some that it cannot give the benefit compared to attending
college
or
university
. I believe that distance learning cannot give more benefits to study at home compared to attending
college
or
university
. There are many reasons why it cannot give the benefit compared to attending
college
or
university
. The
first
reason
is that if
students
attend
college
or
university
lectures, they will solve their doubts at a time. In
this
way, they enhance their knowledge and make their career in a specific field. The
second
reason
is that they become extroverts.
Students
make friends and share their ideas with their friends. The
third
reason
is that
students
cannot do only group learning in a class but
also
participate in group discussions. They know about others views, opinions, ideas and take suggestions. To quote an example, in India, because of covid-19,
students
are learning at home by attending online classes but it is difficult for them to clear their problems. Another
reason
is that
students
focus on their studies because of
presence
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of
teacher
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a teacher
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. In online lectures, they use social media applications and talking with their friends, playing games, watching movies or videos. So, they cannot take more scores from their teachers and distract their minds. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that online classes cannot give more benefits compared to offline classes.
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