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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

#friend #job #opportunity
Dear Rai, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about an exciting employment opportunity that I saw on Linkedin
last
 Saturday. There is an opening for the position of Scrum Master with Accenture. They need someone with experience in facilitating various scrum events & ceremonies.
Moreover
, exposure in the banking domain is an added advantage.
However
, it is very interesting if you know how I came across
this
 job posting.
Last
 weekend, I was casually browsing my profile and saw one of my friends
Aveer
Correct your spelling
After
, posted about
this
 job in his profile. As far as I know, he is
also
 the hiring manager.
Thus
, I can help you out with a reference. I think your profile is quite similar to the requirements ;
thus
,
this
 opening might turn out to be a perfect opportunity for you. Apart from that, I feel your work-life balance will be way better at "Accenture''.
Furthermore
, it is a very woman friendly company. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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