Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Rai, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about an exciting employment opportunity that I saw on Linkedin

last

Saturday. There is an opening for the position of Scrum Master with Accenture. They need someone with experience in facilitating various scrum events & ceremonies.

Moreover

, exposure in the banking domain is an added advantage.

However

, it is very interesting if you know how I came across

this

job posting.

Last

weekend, I was casually browsing my profile and saw one of my friends

Aveer

Correct your spelling

After

, posted about

this

job in his profile. As far as I know, he is

also

the hiring manager.

Thus

, I can help you out with a reference. I think your profile is quite similar to the requirements ;

thus

this

opening might turn out to be a perfect opportunity for you. Apart from that, I feel your work-life balance will be way better at "Accenture''.

Furthermore

, it is a very woman friendly company. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

The Closing

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think is an appropriate use of government money?

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Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.