Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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considered
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by some
people
that, accepting bad
situations
like, unpleasant job or insufficient money is the optimal choice, while others think that it is better to attempt improving
this
kind of
situations
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. In my opinion, I believe that there is always a way to change our paths in order to have a better future.
Nevertheless
, some
situations
are inevitable
therefore
, we cannot replace them. On the
one
hand, we cannot deny that in some cases accepting the reality and dealing with the bad conditions is the only option we have.
For instance
, there are many
people
who live in countries where war is taking a place
consequently
, improving their living standards is not something up to them.
Furthermore
, war cause economic so the bad
situations
will not affect
one
or two, yet it will affect the whole country and changing the live standards there is more complicated.
On the other hand
, many
people
are capable to change their lives conditions if they decide to, but their laziness or is not brave enough to take a step forward in purpose to have a better present and future.
In addition
, blaming others like parents of the government for the lacking of money or having an unpleasant job is just an excuse to avoid blaming themselves.
For example
, the very well-known interviewer Oprah Winfrey used to live in a tough society
besides
poorness, bullying
also
she was raped by a relative. Despite
this
, she challenged the
situations
and studied what she loves. Nowadays Oprah is
one
of the wealthiest
people
in the United States of America, needless to say, she is
one
of the best interviewers in the world. In conclusion, I believe that improving bad
situations
is possible for
people
who challenge the community and the conditions for a better tomorrow.
However
, it depends
also
on the status of the
people
’s countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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