Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

It has been suggested that topic for discussion, some
countries
consider that financial
progress
is the most indispensable aim. The
others
argue that
,
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the other kinds of development are the most essential for a
country
. We will discuss both sides of the argument in the essay.
To begin
with, many
countries
believe that economic growth is the most necessary for the governments. As a matter of fact, in
this
day and age, the financial situation is the most each
country
because
this
condition assists
to
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the
countries
the measures are realized conveniently. if the
government
desire to create new buildings , to get new guns and so on they need
the
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economic power. I must admit that more things can be solved by the budget of the
government
,
this
is the advantage for politics as cooperation will be wanted by more
countries
than in the past.
Furthermore
, new gyms, universities, hospitals and so on will be appeared by the
government
based on
this
power.
Hence
,
the
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economic growth is crucial and important for the
countries
. Let us take a look at the
others
who argue that other kinds of growth are same essential for the
countries
. In fact, the economic situation is indispensable for the
country
, it isn'
t
decisive because every
country
ought to become stronger in the
others
.
For instance
, if the budget of the
country
isn'
t
enough for realizing other obligations, the grant can be got by
this
government
from other
countries
or international organizations. If the
others
can be developed, they can return their debt frequently. if the sport, education and
others
don'
t
get
progress
, the biggest issues will appear
such
as people don'
t
have enough data, the majority of people will become without education and so on. Briefly, I believe strongly the
others
are the most indispensable and crucial like the economic
progress
. Weighing up both sides of
this
argument, I consider that
progress
must be got in the
others
and the control shouldn'
t
be realized only for the economic situation.
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