Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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On earth humans are the most dominant

species

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they decisions even can destroy the planet.Some humans demanding to save endangered creatures from extinction but others think it's a waste of valuable resources.In general ,

people

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activity made it difficult to live forced to extinction.So personally disagree with

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idea.

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foremost, if certain creatures

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excited it will affect other

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and eco may collapse.

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ignoring the situation might kill us or makes our life harder.

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Bees, these insects perfectly adapted to pollinate, helping plants grow, breed and produce food. ,

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world 30% of plants 90% of crops depends on these little heroes.Unfortunately, bees are in danger because of human activities large cities take their places and losing wild space to feed others.

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, scientists say if bees extinct 90$ billion-dollar crops will vanish for that huge loss could struggle to sustain 7 billion

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, approximately 80% of the reason why

animals

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species

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are in danger of extinction is

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activity.In recent years society consumption increased and cities took a lot of wildlife spaces.

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, to making ,society happy companies taking down a lot of forests and some greedy hunters hunting rare

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such

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as African rhinos

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red-listed in 2002 but still folk hunting down because rhino hones is worth one hundred thousand to one million dollars. In conclusion, we can only live on the earth, without

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, insects

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can not live and ,usually humans activity makes

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suffer.For me, it is our responsibility to take care of other

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.Society needs to understand the importance of other

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.If keep disregard these circumstances

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will extinct soon.

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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Small town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?

You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course. Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter • explain why you cannot continue the course • describe the situation • say what you will be doing about it