Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

On earth humans are the most dominant

species

they decisions even can destroy the planet.Some humans demanding to save endangered creatures from extinction but others think it's a waste of valuable resources.In general ,

people

activity made it difficult to live forced to extinction.So personally disagree with

this

idea.

First

foremost, if certain creatures

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are

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excited it will affect other

species

and eco may collapse.

Therefore

ignoring the situation might kill us or makes our life harder.

For example

Bees, these insects perfectly adapted to pollinate, helping plants grow, breed and produce food. ,

Moreover

world 30% of plants 90% of crops depends on these little heroes.Unfortunately, bees are in danger because of human activities large cities take their places and losing wild space to feed others.

Furthermore

, scientists say if bees extinct 90$ billion-dollar crops will vanish for that huge loss could struggle to sustain 7 billion

people

Secondly

, approximately 80% of the reason why

animals

species

are in danger of extinction is

people

activity.In recent years society consumption increased and cities took a lot of wildlife spaces.

In addition

, to making ,society happy companies taking down a lot of forests and some greedy hunters hunting rare

animals

such

as African rhinos

thus

red-listed in 2002 but still folk hunting down because rhino hones is worth one hundred thousand to one million dollars. In conclusion, we can only live on the earth, without

animals

, insects

people

can not live and ,usually humans activity makes

animals

suffer.For me, it is our responsibility to take care of other

animals

.Society needs to understand the importance of other

species

.If keep disregard these circumstances

people

will extinct soon.

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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people say that death penalty is the only way to decrease the rate of crime. while others believe that there are other better ways. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?