Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

On earth humans are the most dominant
species
they decisions even can destroy the planet.Some humans demanding to save endangered creatures from extinction but others think it's a waste of valuable resources.In general ,
people
activity made it difficult to live forced to extinction.So personally disagree with
this
idea.
First
foremost, if certain creatures
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excited it will affect other
species
and eco may collapse.
Therefore
ignoring the situation might kill us or makes our life harder.
For example
Bees, these insects perfectly adapted to pollinate, helping plants grow, breed and produce food. ,
Moreover
world 30% of plants 90% of crops depends on these little heroes.Unfortunately, bees are in danger because of human activities large cities take their places and losing wild space to feed others.
Furthermore
, scientists say if bees extinct 90$ billion-dollar crops will vanish for that huge loss could struggle to sustain 7 billion
people
.
Secondly
, approximately 80% of the reason why
animals
species
are in danger of extinction is
people
activity.In recent years society consumption increased and cities took a lot of wildlife spaces.
In addition
, to making ,society happy companies taking down a lot of forests and some greedy hunters hunting rare
animals
such
as African rhinos
thus
red-listed in 2002 but still folk hunting down because rhino hones is worth one hundred thousand to one million dollars. In conclusion, we can only live on the earth, without
animals
, insects
people
can not live and ,usually humans activity makes
animals
suffer.For me, it is our responsibility to take care of other
animals
.Society needs to understand the importance of other
species
.If keep disregard these circumstances
people
will extinct soon.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • extinction
  • preserve
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • ecological roles
  • conservation efforts
  • scientific discoveries
  • advancements
  • cultural value
  • aesthetic value
  • employment opportunities
  • local economies
  • ethical responsibility
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