It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is essential to teach
children
difference
between right and wrong during their childhood. It is considered, by giving Correct article usage
the difference
punishment
they can learn easily this
distinction. I completely agree with this
opinion because children
are our future they should know the meaning of ethical manner.
Firstly
, it is very important for children
to have knowlege
about right and wrong. Correct your spelling
knowledge
In
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At
the
early age, they are malleable, we can teach them whatever we want to. Correct article usage
an
Also
, they can learn easily and follows it throughout the
life. Correct article usage
apply
In
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At
this
age pupils only see their parents
and teachers they do not have understanding
of friends and other people. Add an article
an understanding
Likewise
, it will be beneficial for them to be familiar with negative and positive coscience
before having contact with others. Correct your spelling
conscience
science
Moreover
, parents
and teacher
should get some strict action, if Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
children
have done mistake
and they should give them Add an article
a mistake
punishment
.
Secondly
, punishment
is only the way children
learn and remember that he
should not allow Correct pronoun usage
they
to do
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doing
this
again, it is a bad thing. There are many types of punishment
parents
and teachers can follow like, they should give them toys or do not talk to them for a day. It will definitely helpful
to impose some manner on them because they just want Replace the word
help
parents
around them and talk as well as they love toys, this
punishment
also
teaches a lesson to obey the rules what parents
sets. It is a lesson for the life from parents
to follow the lane which feel
positive and right.
In conclusion, it is necessary to learn Change the verb form
feels
difference
between ethical and Add an article
the difference
non ethical
means, and it is only possible Add a hyphen
non-ethical
by
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for
parents
or teacher
to teach their Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
children
in
an early age. Change preposition
at
This
menner
will help in future.Correct your spelling
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