Crime rate , in most of countries , is often higher in urban areas than rural areas .why you think that us? Give solution to reduce the crime rate .

There is an increasing rate of crime
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seen mostly in cities than in villages and
this
is usually the result of more affluent people living in these areas whereas village is a
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society where they are aware
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each other. The problems faced in urban areas that lead to various crimes
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discussed below.
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, cities are overcrowded with people, and there are various reasons why
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crime takes place. The crimes we usually see are, theft, chain snatching,
pick pocketing
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and murder.
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these criminal activities is a result of youths who are unemployed
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or goons who are illiterate. Villages are safe because they are sparsely populated and each house member recognises the other. Though most of them are not literate, they are true to their
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. It is very important to
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imbibe knowledge of good quality from a very young age so that youngsters are not lured into various delinquent behaviours and
also
to increase the job availability so that youths are occupied and are paid well for their contributions towards the society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anonymity
  • social cohesion
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • desperation
  • urban stressors
  • mental health
  • community policing
  • job opportunities
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • public spaces
  • surveillance cameras
  • deterrent
  • recidivism
  • reintegration programs
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