Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music helps overcome depression these days. Everyone loves rap.

However

, some think that unofficial internet downloads are made an adverse repercussion on the music field, while others say that

this

trend does not create a huge impact on the artists.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the

one

hand, unauthorized network downloads affect overall opera profit to the producer, composer and artists.

This

type of download will affect rap success.

For example

,

one

illegal website which is Tamil rockers, release all new movies

songs

from their website, people get freely

this

, the opera producer certainly suffers to get profit.

Moreover

,

this

trend might be continued no

one

watch and listen to the original link.

Hence

, the illegal song downloads will affect the opera industry,

this

may be composer will not get another chance for composing

songs

because everybody load from unauthorized with freely.

On the other hand

, the artist always thinks about their's popularity so,

this

is not a big issue because legal or illegal any

one

way people choose to listen to the song

this

, many

songs

got success from folks support.

For instance

, a recently released Tamil movie which is a Master movie song was being released on an unauthorized network, before the authority of a company revealed but that

songs

have gotten successful, everybody likes them.

Hence

, many artists do not care about

this

matter due to they only concentrate on their's famous and popularity. To conclude,

although

both sides have implications.

However

, in my opinion,

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, unlawful load are getting worse in the music industry because so many composers and producers are affected directly. They obtain loss of

this

issue and I hope

this

trend should be stopped and everyone only watches on the original website.