Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music helps overcome depression these days. Everyone loves rap.
However
, some think that unofficial internet downloads are made an adverse repercussion on the music field, while others say that
this
trend does not create a huge impact on the artists.
This
essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the
one
hand, unauthorized network downloads affect overall opera profit to the producer, composer and artists.
This
type of download will affect rap success.
For example
,
one
illegal website which is Tamil rockers, release all new movies
songs
from their website, people get freely
this
, the opera producer certainly suffers to get profit.
Moreover
,
this
trend might be continued no
one
watch and listen to the original link.
Hence
, the illegal song downloads will affect the opera industry,
this
may be composer will not get another chance for composing
songs
because everybody load from unauthorized with freely.
On the other hand
, the artist always thinks about their's popularity so,
this
is not a big issue because legal or illegal any
one
way people choose to listen to the song
this
, many
songs
got success from folks support.
For instance
, a recently released Tamil movie which is a Master movie song was being released on an unauthorized network, before the authority of a company revealed but that
songs
have gotten successful, everybody likes them.
Hence
, many artists do not care about
this
matter due to they only concentrate on their's famous and popularity. To conclude,
although
both sides have implications.
However
, in my opinion,
about
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this
, unlawful load are getting worse in the music industry because so many composers and producers are affected directly. They obtain loss of
this
issue and I hope
this
trend should be stopped and everyone only watches on the original website.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illegal downloads
  • financial losses
  • record labels
  • decrease in sales
  • perception
  • undermine
  • upcoming artists
  • pirated
  • exposure
  • concert attendance
  • merchandise sales
  • alternative revenue streams
  • live performances
  • sponsorships
  • streaming platforms
  • business models
  • loyal fan base
  • adapt
  • mitigate
  • thrive
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