Today the qualtiy of life in large cities is decreasing. State the causes and solutions.

The
qualituy
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quality
of life of
opeople
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people
n big
cities
has
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declined
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declines
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declined
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.
This
essay shall discuss the main causes for the
prblem
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problem
, pollution and
hectc
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hectic
work
schdedules
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schedules
of
people
with
suggestionds
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suggestions
to
reduuce
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reduce
this
problem. The main causes for the deterioration in the
people
life's quality are increasing pollution and the busy routine of
individulas
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individuals
in urban areas.
Firstly
, smoke emitted by the industries in large
cities
pollute
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the environment leading to the intake of polluted air by folks.
Secondly
, excess noise produced by traffic congestion in
such
areas results in
the
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agitated and infuriated behaviour in the general public.
Last
but not the least, a large
nummber
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number
of
people
living in these places fail to
maintan
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maintain
a healthy lifestyle due to the extended working hours. For
exacpmle
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example
,
population
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a population
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which reside in metro
cities
have to work overtime to meet the high cost of living
hiwhc
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high
further
leads to
sedentary
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a sedentary
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and
unhealhty
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unhealthy
healthy
lifestyle. Possible solutions to these issues are to clean the air by shifting factories to
outskirts
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the outskirts
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. if
people
will use more public transport in
comaprison
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comparison
to
orivate
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private
vehickes
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vehicles
,
negative
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the negative
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effect of
over crowding
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overcrowding
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of
vehciles
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vehicles
will be reduced and
this
will mean
pollution free
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pollution-free
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environemnt
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environment
for the
socieyt
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society
..
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.
...
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Further
Furthermore
, sparing few hours by
individulas
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individuals
for leisure activities,
for example
, sports, dance and music will
also
improve
the
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well-being
of
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them
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. To conclude, pollutions by factories and traffic are the main reasons for
decrease
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the decrease
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in the quality of life which could be solved by moving industries to open areas. Apart from that, tight
wokr
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work
deadlines of
people
in metropolitan
cities
worsen the problem which could be eased by spending
sometime
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on physical
activites
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activities
.
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