Today the qualtiy of life in large cities is decreasing. State the causes and solutions.
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qualituy
of life of Correct your spelling
quality
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n big Correct your spelling
people
cities
has Change the verb form
declined
declines
. Correct your spelling
declined
This
essay shall discuss the main causes for the prblem
, pollution and Correct your spelling
problem
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work Correct your spelling
hectic
schdedules
of Correct your spelling
schedules
people
with suggestionds
to Correct your spelling
suggestions
reduuce
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reduce
this
problem.
The main causes for the deterioration in the people
life's quality are increasing pollution and the busy routine of individulas
in urban areas. Correct your spelling
individuals
Firstly
, smoke emitted by the industries in large cities
pollute
the environment leading to the intake of polluted air by folks. Change the verb form
pollutes
Secondly
, excess noise produced by traffic congestion in such
areas results in the
agitated and infuriated behaviour in the general public. Correct article usage
apply
Last
but not the least, a large nummber
of Correct your spelling
number
people
living in these places fail to maintan
a healthy lifestyle due to the extended working hours. For Correct your spelling
maintain
exacpmle
, Correct your spelling
example
population
which reside in metro Add an article
a population
the population
cities
have to work overtime to meet the high cost of living hiwhc
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high
further
leads to sedentary
and Correct article usage
a sedentary
unhealhty
lifestyle.
Possible solutions to these issues are to clean the air by shifting factories to Correct your spelling
unhealthy
healthy
outskirts
. if Correct article usage
the outskirts
people
will use more public transport in comaprison
to Correct your spelling
comparison
orivate
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private
vehickes
, Correct your spelling
vehicles
negative
effect of Add an article
the negative
over crowding
of Correct your spelling
overcrowding
vehciles
will be reduced and Correct your spelling
vehicles
this
will mean pollution free
Add a hyphen
pollution-free
environemnt
for the Correct your spelling
environment
socieyt
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society
..
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.
...
Furtheror
, sparing few hours by Correct your spelling
Further
Furthermore
individulas
for leisure activities, Correct your spelling
individuals
for example
, sports, dance and music will also
improve the
well-being Change the word
their
of
Change preposition
apply
them
.
To conclude, pollutions by factories and traffic are the main reasons for Correct pronoun usage
apply
decrease
in the quality of life which could be solved by moving industries to open areas. Apart from that, tight Add an article
the decrease
a decrease
wokr
deadlines of Correct your spelling
work
people
in metropolitan cities
worsen the problem which could be eased by spending sometime
on physical Replace the word
some time
activites
.Correct your spelling
activities
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