After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.

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. Your Friend, Rahul Kishore

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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180 words

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