The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram illustrates and compares
road
access to a Use synonyms
city
hospital in Use synonyms
year
2007 and in 2010 after the redevelopment plan.
In Change the article
the year
year
2007, there was a single Change the article
the year
road
that connected Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the hospital
hospital
to Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
Use synonyms
city
Correct article usage
the city
Use synonyms
road
. People could enter from either Fix the agreement mistake
roads
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
or the gate where combined parking used to be. Combine parking consisted of parking for Use synonyms
public
Add an article
the public
as well as
staff. Six Linking Words
indivdual
bus stops could be located, three on either side of Correct your spelling
individual
hospital
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the hospital
road
.
By 2010, there were major changes. To tackle Use synonyms
increased
load of vehicles, Add an article
an increased
the increased
a
new public parking was found situated east Remove the article
apply
to
the hospital. Change preposition
of
Old
parking lot was assigned to staff members only. There were two new Add an article
The old
roundabout
on hospital Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
road
to deal with traffic joining Use synonyms
ring
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the ring
road
and Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
. A dedicated bus station was introduced west to the hospital Use synonyms
road
.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, in just three years, Linking Words
major
development occurred which was Add an article
a major
due to
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increased
number of people coming to Correct article usage
an increased
Use synonyms
city
Add an article
the city
a city
hospital
. It Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
also
indicates that more people got injured in 2010 when compared to 2007.Linking Words
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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