In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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It appears that Miss Sylvia Marcellina Ahaotu arrived in the

on 20th January 2011 as a

student

holding a

student

visa

valid from 31st December 2010 to 31st October 2012. Before the expiry of her

visa

, she submitted an

application

to the

Home

Office

for

further

leave to remain as a

student

under Tier 4 (General)

Student

. The

Home

Office

granted her

further

leave to remain in the

valid from 22nd June 2013 to 03rd December 2015.

Subsequently

, before the expiry of her

visa

, she submitted an

application

for

further

leave to remain in the

and the

Home

Office

granted her

further

leave to remain valid from 21st February 2016 to 7th August 2018.

Finally

, she submitted an

application

to the

Home

Office

for

further

leave to remain before her

visa

expires and she was granted

further

leave to remain in the

valid until 28th September 2021. During her stay in the

, Miss Ahaotu completed her Master of Science (MSc) in Project Management in Construction on 28th February 2013 and

further

, she completed her Doctor of Philosophy (PhD) on 31st January 2019. The enclosed education certificates meet English proficiency requirements for indefinite leave to remain in the

Further

, our client has already passed her

Life

in the

test and electronic reference has already been given in the online

application

form. Since 20th January 2011, she has been residing in the

legally and qualifies for indefinite leave to remain in the

on the basis of completion of her 10

years

of legal

residence

in the

. During her stay, she has established a significantly strong private

life

apart from her family

life

. She has successfully completed the

Life

in the

Test and a PhD Degree to meet the

Life

in the

and English requirements. Our client, Miss Ahaotu has completed more than 10

years

of lawful

residence

in the

having

initially

entered the

as a

student

. Throughout, her stay in the

, she has never been absent from the

for more than six months during each year of her stay in the

and she now wishes to submit an

application

to the

Home

Office

for indefinite leave to remain in the

on the basis of her long legal

residence

(10

Years

). Our client qualifies to take the benefit of the long

residence

concession on the basis of her 10

years

of legal stay in the

. It is submitted that

residence

, whether lawful or

otherwise

, must

also

be continuous

residence

. Continuous

residence

is not broken by an absence of six months or less, as long as the person had

leave

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to remain at the time of their departure from and return to the

. The requirements to be met by an applicant for indefinite leave to remain on the ground of long

residence

in the United Kingdom are that:

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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