Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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Technological advancements have surged over the past few years, invention of artificial intelligence and
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has increased in various areas of our lives which includes smartwatches and automated transportation devices. Robots are being made more like humans, so that, in the near future people can be replaced by these
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, not all jobs can be replaced by these
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,
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will still be valued for various jobs, we will look at various facts that will help us prove
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with, artificial intelligence has replaced various
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and has advanced
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. As mentioned before, devices
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as smartwatches and cars have made life easier,
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, we can set alarms on our watch and
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keep reminders in them. One other example is the fully automated cars,which does not require a trained driver and has
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system to help navigate through the roads.
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,
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just proves that robots are
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that aid
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in their daily activities,
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is
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with the belief that they will take over the job in future.
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, these
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are engineered by
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, there are limitations to every
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product and one
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limitation
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seen in robots is the lack of warmth that we human beings are gifted with. Most of the job we see requires these characteristics,
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a doctor has to be empathetic and treat patients with care ,
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, a teacher needs to be compassionate while teaching her students. It could be surmised that these
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things would fail in
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tasks.
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it is important to advance in artificial intelligence, but replacing
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with these
machines
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does not seem logical, These
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simplify our
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but can not entirely take up our place in
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society,
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, it can be ascertained that jobs in future will be retained by human beings.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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