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DESCRIBE AN UNFORGETTABLE ADVERTISEMENT THAT YOU SAW OR HEARD. YOU SHOULD SAY: WHERE YOU SAW, WHAT KIND OF AD IT WAS, WHAT THE CONTENTS AND WHY IT WAS UNFORGETTABLE

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Last
 week, while waiting for my husband to pick me up from work, I was watching Tv in the lobby when I saw
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publicity that has stuck in my mind. It was a commercial
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 Nike shoes with Mikael Jordan. In it he said: I’ve missed more than 9
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 shots and I’ve lost 3 hundred games in my entire career. In so many times, I failed over and over again in my life and that’s why I succeed. I couldn’t get
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. Not because I thought buying Nike baskets would make me as successful as Jordan, but because of his unflinching determination and perseverance. Life is full of challenges that test our level of commitment. I believe having concretes goals divides winners from losers. Victorious individuals are not ones who have never failed, but those who kept trying. The most essential skill that winners acquire is an understanding that
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 is only possible if you have the courage to change what you have been doing if it is not achieving what you desire. Each fall and disappointment can teach us vital lessons and can provide
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 increase in our self-confidence. From that day to now, I'm pursuing my goals without
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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