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Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring students’ performance and should be replaced by continuous assessment. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In recent times, there has been an increasing number of people who support the idea that formal
examinations
 are not a suitable way to assess how
students
 perform at school and that
examinations
 should be replaced completely. In my opinion, while I agree that continuous assessment is an effective way to measure
students
’ performance, I believe that formal
examinations
 should
also
 be maintained. On the one hand, I accept that continual assessment is a useful method to evaluate
students
’
ability
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.
First
 of all, these assessments allow
students
 who
work
 at a slower pace more time to
work
 on their course or projects and put up with those with
faster
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 pace. The teachers can
also
 observe and assist
students
 who cannot catch up with their classmates,
therefore
, the teachers can give
students
 more opportunities to improve during the term.
Furthermore
, assessments
such
 as presentations, designs, filming a video, etc can create creativity and encourage
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work
 which is an important skill for the future.
On the other hand
, formal
examinations
 are
also
 a satisfactory way to measure the
students
’ performance.
Firstly
, they are a fair system and
also
 the easiest tool to regularly assess
students
’ capability. Every student has an equal opportunity since they all do the same exam at the same time, meaning that those who
work
 hard will be rewarded with high grades. Another advantage is that exams promote competitiveness among
students
 as they have to
work
 harder to improve their knowledge and skills if they want to have better results compared to other
students
. In conclusion, I believe that both continuous assessment and formal
examinations
 are effective in different ways.
Therefore
, both of those methods should be used to assess the
students
 comprehensively.
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