Unmanned vehicles will become more and more popular in the future. Passengers travelling inside these robot cars will be only human. Do you think the benefits of these surpass the drawbacks?
There is an opinion that
driverless
cars
will become more and more common in the future and the passengers will only be human. In my opinion, those cars
bring a lot of benefits
to people
, but it also
brings limitations for them. This
essay will give reasons and explanations for them. Firstly
, when driverless
cars
become popular in the future, the number of people
using it will increase because it has many different benefits
. but those benefits
will make people
more dependent on technology. And that makes human laziness more and more developed according to the advanced level of the car. In addition
, we may be too dependent on the car to let children ride to school by themselves, which can lead to many dangers such
as meeting robbers. Second
, if driverless
cars
become so common that they even replace normal cars
, people
will have trouble transporting goods. Currently, it is very difficult for goods and heavy objects to be transported over long distances. Currently, it is very difficult for goods and heavy objects to be transported over long distances. If those advanced cars
make people
lazy, they don't want to work, but it only allows people
to use it
. So who will do those jobs? In conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
them
driverless
cars
will probably become popular and there are many benefits
from them. But it will also
bring limitations for people
such
as making people
dependent on technology and making it difficult for people
to work.Submitted by doibichhoa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite