Countries should produce the food that population eats ,and import as littel as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons,examples to your answer.

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food

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is the most necessary component for every living being. It provides us nutrition,vitamins,energy and many more which is important for our body to perform any task

food

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is present in many various forms on the earth many of them are wheat, rice and more .

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I believe that countries should do more focus on the production of the crops that their population prefer to eats,it will

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result in little import.

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, to produce that

food

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which individuals eat more in countries is fully dependent on

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. even if

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are forced to grow the crops according to the need of countries that may result in less production. Because they might don't know the right process to deal with that crop .

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not be interested to do that or might see that crop as less

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than they previously growing. But

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,if the government gets success in convincing

farmers

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of its nation

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it will be very beneficial for them in many different ways like

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decline in the expenses on import of

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increase the national income from the Gaultier sector and give its result on GDP (Gross domestic product) in a positive way.

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, if most of the population of the nation prefer to eat rice,

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farmers

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should more focus on the increase in the production of it , owing to the fact that more individuals should buy rice from them and it will decrease that tax and transport charges for export of them.At the same ,time we don't need to import that crop, or maybe a little bit so

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help the government to make reduce imports and use that money to make the country more

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. In the way of conclusion, in the reference of above ,points I completely agree with nations should look to more that type of

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which is the

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prefers of there people.

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Countries should produce the food that population eats ,and import as littel as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons,examples to your answer.

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In many countries, the gap between the rich and poor is widening. What problems can this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

“Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?