Countries should produce the food that population eats ,and import as littel as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons,examples to your answer.

Needless to say,
food
is the most necessary component for every living being. It provides us nutrition,vitamins,energy and many more which is important for our body to perform any task
food
is present in many various forms on the earth many of them are wheat, rice and more .
Personally
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I believe that countries should do more focus on the production of the crops that their population prefer to eats,it will
also
result in little import.
firstly
, to produce that
food
which individuals eat more in countries is fully dependent on
farmers
. even if
farmers
are forced to grow the crops according to the need of countries that may result in less production. Because they might don't know the right process to deal with that crop .
In addition
, they
also
not be interested to do that or might see that crop as less
profit making
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than they previously growing. But
on the other hand
,if the government gets success in convincing
farmers
of its nation
then
it will be very beneficial for them in many different ways like
huge
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decline in the expenses on import of
food
.
Besides
,
this
will
also
increase the national income from the Gaultier sector and give its result on GDP (Gross domestic product) in a positive way.
for instance
, if most of the population of the nation prefer to eat rice,
then
farmers
should more focus on the increase in the production of it , owing to the fact that more individuals should buy rice from them and it will decrease that tax and transport charges for export of them.At the same ,time we don't need to import that crop, or maybe a little bit so
this
will
also
help the government to make reduce imports and use that money to make the country more
develop
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. In the way of conclusion, in the reference of above ,points I completely agree with nations should look to more that type of
food
which is the
first
prefers of there people.
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