Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some people think that
men
and
women
are born with different characteristics which determine what kind of jobs are open to them. While I agree that
this
opinion is true to some extent, I would argue that
this
can not apply to the world of work today. There are several reasons why many people think that
men
and
women
have different qualities. In terms of physical strength,
women
are simply not strong enough to do labour jobs, including driving trucks or working on construction sites.
In addition
,
women
are considered to be not suitable for dangerous work and
thus
,
women
do not tend to enter the army. In terms of traditional stereotypes, some people argue that
women
are more sensitive and caring than
men
. Because of
this
, they are more suited to some professions, namely nursing or the care of children and the elderly.
However
, nowadays, the workplace has changed dramatically, so there is no room for
this
bias.
Firstly
,
women
have equal educational opportunities and gain the same qualifications as
men
.
Therefore
, they should have the same chance to reach the top of their chosen fields if they work hard.
Secondly
, the more modern outlook has broken the traditional barriers that prevent
women
and
men
from doing certain professions: truck drivers and workers in the case of the
women
; cooking, nusering and cleaning jobs in the case of
men
. In conclusion, there is no room for gender discrimination, either against
women
or against
men
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender roles
  • inherent qualities
  • social dynamics
  • merit-based selection
  • advancements in technology
  • levelled the playing field
  • gender stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • physical differences
  • workplace
  • evolving
  • traditional view
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