In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard for their study. What do you think the causes and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades, the

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burden has been increased on the youngsters. They do have not much

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to relax. Resultant, anxiety is increasing among them due to

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pressure. In

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essay, I would discuss the main cause of

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load and the solution.

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is the era of competition , young students have a lot of pressure to achieve maximum marks from their

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and parents. Parents and teachers think if they achieve

a good academic scores

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a good academic score

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only they have a chance to get admission to university and

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according to their interest

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field

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. To get the

desire

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score, they stretch

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time

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.

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, It is mandatory to attend the class to get the minimum attendance in the

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. After

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, they go for coaching classes . They spend most of their

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completing the homework of the

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and extra classes. They have not much remaining to spend on themselves.

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cause

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stress among them. I would like to suggest that education

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school

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should be improved so that there is no need to take extra classes. I prefer coaching

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should be allowed after

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. Parents should support the idea and they should stop putting pressure on children . They should help and encourage them to develop Another field so that young students can spend gala

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in sports,

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and friends.

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would help to grow

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a decent personality. In the end, I conclude that hard work in

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is mandatory to get

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desire university and institution. At the same

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, physical and mental fitness must be developed with balance. Good learner students with strong mental and physical personalities make a healthy nation.