*Assignment* In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
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crime-related
offense
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offence
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this
really brings concern to the society as it direct hits Linking Words
to
the Change preposition
apply
saftey
aspect. I would like to throw some light on Correct your spelling
safety
it's
root causes and solutions that could help to resolve it fully or to some extent to have a peaceful living.
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The first
foremost
root cause is a high-tech era. Nowadays digital Add an article
the foremost
techonology
is in Correct your spelling
technology
boom
, wherein statistics Add an article
the boom
a boom
says
that most Change the verb form
say
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apply
the
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apply
people
are familiar with TV or Internet or any other digital Use synonyms
medias
. It has now become ubiquitous. Correct your spelling
media
People
tend to learn Use synonyms
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things faster through Correct article usage
apply
such
mediums, either it is good or detrimental. Linking Words
For example
, in our neighbourhood, there is a little boy around 5 years and he belongs to well to do family. Linking Words
However
, recently he had hit his friend with some object. Though that incident was not that serious, Linking Words
but
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doing
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next
time. Linking Words
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, when his parents asked him, from where he learnt Linking Words
such
thing and in reply, he simply said Television. Linking Words
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nowdays
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nowadays
people
are very much influenced by Use synonyms
the
Technology.
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secondly
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focus
surrounding
and status. It narrates Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
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people
's upbringing. Use synonyms
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surrounding
is not healthy, poverty, illiteracy, bad companies and many more, Add an article
the surrounding
these
could Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
lead to Linking Words
the
crimes.
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apply
As a result
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firstly
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people
should have control Use synonyms
on
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that
they should Add a comma
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able
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phenomenon
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phenomena
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Self control
. Add a hyphen
Self-control
Secondly
, the government should implement certain laws/Linking Words
punishment
against the crimes. It will not only help to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
punishments
the
crime but Correct article usage
apply
also
help to maintain discipline in the Public. Linking Words
Last
but not the least, Linking Words
ethics related
programme should be introduced in the schools, so that from childhood only Add a hyphen
ethics-related
people
value it.
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conclusion
it is a joint Add a comma
,conclusion
efforts
. Each and every person should be liable towards the Society in order to make it a safe place.Change the noun form
effort
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