Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people prefer travelling with a tour guide due to they do not need to think about their meals, transports and so on

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all journeys. As for me, I strongly disagree with

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I would like to

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alone without any tour guide. In

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essay, I am going to discuss why I support travelling without a tour guide. The major reason

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time is freestyle. In the past years, I attended the number of the

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group, I realized cannot go anywhere I would like to go in my mind. I am a big fan of shopping,

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, in Japan,

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one of tourist attractions, tourists must go shopping in the Osaka popular shopping streets including my mom and me.

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, I always spend three or over-time

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buying clothes, shoes and something for snacks in Japan. I was disappointed that I cannot do something I like.

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, I believe that we could easier expose the local culture than

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with a group. The beneficial thing is we can eat the dishes which we favourited or others want to try it out as well.

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, I found most of the

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agencies which arranged European cases, often allowed their guests to go to Chinese restaurants rather than the local stores. I think

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the worse way to have an opportunity to trying the specific cuisines in the region. In conclusion, I believe that it is the best way to

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by arranging everything myself. Travelling is not only learning how to search the destinations but

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a special experience which has beautiful memories that can be recorded and remembered in the lifetime even your

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experience had some bad things like as you got lost.

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