Many museums charge for admission while others ate free. Do you think that the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that nowadays, many

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take place in the world. Many

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are charging the visitors for admission, while others are free charging. From my point of view,

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charging the visitors for visiting the

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are more benefits to everyone in the world, there are offer some drawbacks and can present some impacts to

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. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. On the one hand, one of the positive impacts of the

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entrance fee is that the

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will have

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to maintain, and there can create more utilities and structures for the comfort of the tourists.

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, if the

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where are managed by a private company are charging

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for admission, they will have enough

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to create and improve some facilities in their

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as improving the restrooms.

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, some

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of the private organization are not supported by the state governments in the country. As the result, they will charge to visit their

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, for they can pay taxes to the

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.

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, some

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think that every

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in the world should be free charged visitors for the

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entrance free because the citizens who are poor cannot access some arts in the

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.

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, if

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want to see the Thailand Art exhibitions, but the tickets are expensive, they will not be able to visit

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exhibition.

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, the

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do not have enough

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to maintain and build some facilities

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. In conclusion, I strongly think that charging

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for the

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entrance fee can offer both advantages and disadvantages.

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, it is recommended that the public governments should support the

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to every

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in their country. While some private

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should decrease the price of tickets after the ministry helped. It seems to me that the advantages of

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topic outweigh the disadvantages.