It is undeniable that nowadays, many
take place in the world. Many
are charging the visitors for admission, while others are free charging. From my point of view,
charging the visitors for visiting the
are more benefits to everyone in the world, there are offer some drawbacks and can present some impacts to
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. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail.
On the one hand, one of the positive impacts of the
entrance fee is that the
to maintain, and there can create more utilities and structures for the comfort of the tourists.
, if the
where are managed by a private company are charging
for admission, they will have enough
to create and improve some facilities in their
as improving the restrooms.
of the private organization are not supported by the state governments in the country. As the result, they will charge to visit their
, for they can pay taxes to the
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On the other hand
think that every
in the world should be free charged visitors for the
entrance free because the citizens who are poor cannot access some arts in the
want to see the Thailand Art exhibitions, but the tickets are expensive, they will not be able to visit
do not have enough
to maintain and build some facilities
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In conclusion, I strongly think that charging
entrance fee can offer both advantages and disadvantages.
, it is recommended that the public governments should support the
in their country. While some private
should decrease the price of tickets after the ministry helped. It seems to me that the advantages of
topic outweigh the disadvantages.