Many people these days believe that technology can be helpful in education. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and comes to a logical conclusion at the end.

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one of the most beneficial elements of modern

education

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using

technology

for educational goals.

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education

in the era of electronic devices will be discussed.

First

of all, many of

technologies

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that we granted today are the result of vast scientific progress. In the modern

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we have got an

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quantity of devices,

such

a laptop, mobile phone, tablet, which are the greater helper for people than anyone else. It is evident that technologies allow people to access knowledge from

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one source anytime,

instead

of searching specific data in thousands of different resources.

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, decades ago it has been time-consuming to find the right information in the libraries,

however

, there were no other options for getting data. Despite on many advantages that we have got from technologies, there

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still a negative impact on

education

. One of the biggest problems is that students have developed poor study habits due to easily accessible information. Many experts believe that

technology

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obstructed the way of learning, because

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most students cannot pass the test without their gadgets. In conclusion,

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process becomes a reality.

However

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that students should be aware of

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impact

technology

has on

education

and not fully rely on their devices.