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In many countries people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. do you think it is a positive or a negative development.

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Many people believe that to be alone can be independent than in past , but other people live with their family it can help themself for college and I believe that lives with others are beneficial. Today, we are seeing the multitude of people who think that to be alone and doing their own can concentrate on their management,
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,living alone is good for examination days that
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 result can help to forget a better degree .
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, living with their others
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 as family ,friends and so on can manage their program and it will capable for destination their goal,
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,having a ceremony, doing laboratory with other and so in can be organized sooner than alone .
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 ,
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 to be aln can manage sooner but live with can carefully manage so is an advantage .
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