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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotion In a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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I think the events
such
 as World Cup,
olympics
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 can help in bringing solace in international relationships but the opinion would differ from person to person. These
games
 are held worldwide with great support and expectations. While the popular
games
 can contribute to world peace by bringing the
countries
 together but if we try to look deeply these
countries
 are actually competing with each other which can be one of the factors for hatred amongst nations.
For example
, A cricket match between India and Pakistan are always big
matches
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match
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 in
two
countries
where
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were
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 full of tensions overflow. In the worst
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sedentary
sedentair
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 the troubles caused by
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losing
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loosing
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games
 affect the players directly. These
two
 rival
countries
 have their patriotic emotions explode in an aggressive way. There are some occasions when these
games
 have brought down the tensions between
two
 rival nations.
For instance
, in 2008 turkey and Armenia teams were geared up to play a World Cup and the Turkish president accepted.Armenia
loosend
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loosened
loosen
 visa restrictions so that Turkish fans could join the game. The match opened new diplomatic channels between
two
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countries
. In conclusion, though international sporting occasions can be one of the good ways to ease tensions;
however
, I believe that
games
 cannot be fundamental ways for
the
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peaceful international relationships.
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